free write #1

"tie my hands" by lil wayne.



i like this song because its like so awesome. idk its just a really good song loike if you listen to the words...=]...this is my free write.

"Developing Your Character"

her name is jenny. jenny is 22 years old. she has 2 older brothers and a younger one as well. she is the only girl so all her life she has been getteing what she wants. she is a model for under wear. she knows how to sing and dance. she has not been discovered but she gets around. she has 3 kids. they are all a year apart and all from diffenrt fathers. the first childs fothers is a famouse rapper he goes by the name of busta ryhems. her second childs fathers is the mail man and his name is jeffery. the third child was from a sperm bank. She is married to a guy named timmothy he also goes by the name of tim. they have been married since she was in high school. he was her math teacher. he is 20 years older then her and her parents seem to like him. the last 5 years of their marrige has not been so good. she put the kids up for adoption because she can not take care of them. so she has been on the road since then. she has been a bck up dancer for almost every one. she just signed devorce papers so you know where thats going. the last year jenny has been touring with an unknown siger that goes by the name of jesse. jesse is a female. jenny and jesse have been spotted together almostt every day not only at conerts but out in public holding hands and shopping. jesse has just informed the public that her an jenny are in love and are going to get married with in the next 4 months. 4 months and they are married. they are happily in love and are tlking about children. 3 years have passed and they have adopted their first child.jenny, jesse and francis are a happy little family...=]...the end...lol...

setting

"universal Studios"
1)
I feel the exictment coming over me as i go thrugh the security gates of the park.
I see the front gate to enter the park and everyone handing the tickte to the ticket person.
I hear the screams of the people yelling in fear.
I taste the coke zero as i drink the rest before entering the park.
I smell the sweetness of the candy store that i have just passed.

2)
I see the exotic dancers that are on the other side of the gate.
I feel the exitment leave me and fear set in.
I hear the sound of uncontrolable fear as i hand my tickte to the ticket person.
I smell the baby lotion on my hands as i cover my face from the scary guy following me.
I taste the flavor of the gum that i have just put into my mouth.

3)
I hear the sounds of helcopters hovering over us.
I see half dead army men roaming around with their faces distorted.
I smell the fog as we walk through it.
I taste the chill in the air.
I feel the hair on my arms stand up as the clown walks toward me.

4)
I hear the motor of the chainsaw as he starts it up.
I smell the gas of it as he makes his way closer.
I taste the fumes of the chainsaw as he gets even closer.
I see him(the clown) glance my way as he passes me.
I feel myself catch my breath as he walks past me.

5)
I see the first maze in the distance.
I hear my boyfriend ask the clown to take a picture with me as we enter the line.
I feel my heart beat faster as the clown is stnding next to me.
I taste my saliva as i swallow in fear.
I smell the sent of rotting as we leave the maze.

6)
I feel the time is late so i look at my phone and it is 2...the park is closing.
I hear the sounds of screams and chainsaws as we leave the park.
I smell the coffe of the coffe shop as we pass by.
I taste the water as i take a drink of it.
I see the clown come near me...i scream in fear..i dig my head into my boyfriends sweater...and i realize that i need to go home and go to sleep because i have work the next morning...=]